Umm, in my opinion those are pretty immature lyrics. "I was hoping to get laid", if that's all, then you didn't really love her like you say later on. "She must have thought I was gay." How does that figure? If she fucked with your brain, she obviously knew you liked her, therefore not gay because you like a girl. "She was one hot babe." Now there's a good reason to love a girl. Sorry if that was mean, but I'm sure you could do a better job of writing lyrics. Also, trading lyrics? That makes a song fake because you aren't saying how you feel, you're saying how someone else feels. A song is supposed to be about your feelings, so write your own lyrics.
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