i took a puff once... it tasted good. i wanted more but i really dont wannt get adicted. and smokings not that bad, it helps you lose weight!

im titling the song "Carcinogen"

Tobacco smoke contains over 4,000 different chemicals. At least 43 are known carcinogens (cause cancer in humans).

id say it is purdy bad. Speed makes u lose weight to, so does heroin etc. and that shit is just as addictive... so y not do it? its all poision and ppl poision your mind to make u think its not bad for you but they lie cuz they want your money.

is it because it releaves stress and relaxes you? so does jerking off... y not do that in between classes and let ppl breath in the bathroom.

edited:

Benzene< Ammonia, Acetone, Tar...
Its just like inhaling exhaust from a car

Look at you, holding that cancer stick
you fucking smell, you make me sick.

I shouldn't cry when you die
Its not my problem whe your heart stops thumping

ITS YOUR GOD DAMN FAULT!

^ sounds to much like a poem, if anyone could help me create a short, funny song from this it would b great.

I edited my original song as well...

verse1:
she disappeared one day
i felt torn and strayed
she left me there, a lonely boy
what was I to say?

verse2:
she used me for a while
I just didn't care to know how
I loved her truely, then she screwed me
and im still pissed off

chorus:
so have a nice day
Hope you enjoyed those times
you really fucked with my brain
after that night
i wanted to end my life,
please stay out of sight
just go away

verse3:
she wanted to get with my buds
it really made me nuts.
I wanted her happy while I felt crappy
It made no sense at all.

verse4:
She teased me everyday,
she must have thought i was afraid
she made me nervous, she was gorgous
She was one hot babe.

chorus:
so have a nice day
Hope you enjoyed those times
you really fucked with my brain
after that night
i wanted to end my life,
please stay out of sight
just go away

just go away! just go away... go away..

sounds abit better. still awaiting more revisions to both.

When I was suffering from severe depression a while back, I wrote alot songs, abused my depression medication, read alot about everything, and shit... But I never smoked anything. I have tried cigarettes in recent years, but I got nothing out of them, and I tried a cigar about a week ago, and I actually liked that(I now see why unreal does too)...
BTW Moffy, although I am not a Blink 182/pop-punk fan, I do think it is good that you are writing lyrics and stuff... Next step is to take up the guitar or keyboard...

well dammit! i don't care if cigarettes contain 4000 chemicals.. fuck it! i'm going to die anyway. plus.. it's one of the very few things in life that brings me enjoyment... why? i don't fucking know... but it does! maybe because i can actually relax for about the 5 or 10 minutes it takes for me to smoke one. maybe it's because it actually does taste good. i smoke the menthols which are full of minty flavor!

and yeah... it is a great stress reliever. oh, plus one of the only reasons i'll leave the house is to go out and buy another pack. otherwise i have no desire to leave the house. pretty sad huh? yeah.. it sucks it's called agoraphobia.. and i have it! yay! ( for those of you who don't know.. it's when someone has the abnormal fear of open or public places.)

heres another i began about another chick. I just thought of this but i dunno if i will actually make a song about it.

"toyed"

it started off goood like it should
it ended up bad, you made me mad
you said you had changed, but whos to blame.
and once more, i think your still a fucking whore.

Keep 'em coming Moff, you're on a roll...

my friend is allways talking about screwing like bongo trumms in someone ear=)

i usually write down lyrics when ever they come to mind. some are good, some need worked with.

CURSE.... I WANT YOUR AVTAR SO BADLY

I've already begun learning bass, its very fun.

yeah fleshy, i had a minty one...

and.....you know you and gizmo should hook up right? your both sound so good for each other....anyways, just a sugestion

and...i dont want curses avatar, i want the girls in it lol

Custom avatars are available to purchase at UGN Security for $20 which goes towards donations.

Yeh, I think Flesh and I would make a jeet couple.

Oh, and I was bustin lyrics and shit out earlier... I own the http://www.livejournal.com community Poems, and all a song is is a poem with music...